2. An aeroplane crashed into the erupting volcano and again it went boom.
3. On halloween it was stormy and the thunder went boom.
4. On bonfire night the fireworks went boom in the sky.
5. The cannon in Alnwick castle went boom.
By Niamh
1. The colossal volcano erupted and it went boom.
2. An aeroplane crashed into the erupting volcano and again it went boom. 3. On halloween it was stormy and the thunder went boom. 4. On bonfire night the fireworks went boom in the sky. 5. The cannon in Alnwick castle went boom. By Niamh
3 Comments
Mr Lockey
30/9/2014 04:45:05 am
Some nice use of description to make your work more interesting, you are working well towards your target. Thank you.
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2/10/2014 03:57:59 am
Hello Niahm,
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amelie
12/10/2014 07:01:39 am
grate
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