The tent was huge with lots of people in it.
All the way through there was loud music in the back ground.
The acts were on ropes doing back flips and all sorts.
There is lots of animals in circus acts.
The performers are skilled and brave.
The tent was huge with lots of people in it. All the way through there was loud music in the back ground. The acts were on ropes doing back flips and all sorts. There is lots of animals in circus acts.
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Mr Lockey
20/5/2014 11:58:21 am
I like the ideas you have shared Jenson, particularly the third sentence about the music. Remember the work we have done on using different sentence openers? Next challenge try for 5 different openers.
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Kye English
22/5/2014 12:49:21 pm
very good jenson you done well.
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cailan
23/5/2014 10:35:55 am
you worked so hard jenson good work
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Mrs D
25/5/2014 02:03:01 am
Hi Jenson, you have certainly created a marvellous picture with your words. I feel like I can imagine the skilled performers and hear the music.
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