The circus is funny. The circus has silly clowns. Some people are scared of the clowns at the circus. The circus travels to lots of different places. The first time I went to the circus I was scared of the clowns.
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Mr Lockey
21/5/2014 05:18:57 am
I had no idea clowns scared you so much Connor! I had better leave my red nose and big shoes at home tomorrow. I really like your last sentence. Try to include some connectives to allow you to add extra details, it will make your work even better. Good try.
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6/6/2014 03:45:38 am
Hi Connor
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