If I was at the circus I would see red nosed clownsprancing about. Also an acrobat doing daring tricks and stunts. They would be performing in a red and white tent. People wanting to see the stuff that they do there would sit on benches. People would clap and cheer or laugh.
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Mr Lockey
21/5/2014 05:16:03 am
Another great piece of writing Ewan, I love the detail you include in every sentence. Would you be able to think about your writing target and perhaps explore the punctuation you are using? Try and get some speech marks, exclamation marks and questions into your work. Well done!
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Mrs Skinner
10/6/2014 03:35:01 am
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