In the circus sometimes there are tightrope walkers. All the circus's have a ring master. Clowns are funny in a circus. One of the circus's is called Planet Circus. I might be going to the circus.
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Mr Lockey
21/5/2014 05:20:26 am
Phoebie you have some great ideas when we spoke about the challenge. Look to add this level of detail in your written work but adding some adjectives and maybe even a connective. Good try.
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Broadway y4(Team5sc)
4/6/2014 07:07:34 am
"I liked your good ideas and your adjectives well done
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