As I walked into the trenches I am scared.
As I walked into the trenches I thinking of my family.
As I walked into the trenches I hope to make it home alive.
As I walked into the trenches I am wishing this war will end soon.
As I walked into the trenches I feel worried in case I get shot.
As I walked into the trenches I am scared. As I walked into the trenches I thinking of my family. As I walked into the trenches I hope to make it home alive. As I walked into the trenches I am wishing this war will end soon.
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Mr Lockey
20/11/2014 09:40:10 am
Well written sentences Amber. Clear punctuation and every one makes sense, more importantly they describe the feelings of a WW1 soldier really well.
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