I love musical instruments especially the drums. When I hit the drum it goes boom boom boom.
When I was eating my dinner I heard footsteps it was a giant, he went boom boom boom.
I watch the fireworks From a treehouse. They sparkled in the sky and went boom boom.
I love musical instruments especially the drums. When I hit the drum it goes boom boom boom. When I was eating my dinner I heard footsteps it was a giant, he went boom boom boom.
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Jack s
11/10/2014 02:43:54 am
Well done
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amelie
12/10/2014 06:47:21 am
it is my work i hope it is ok.
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Mr Lockey
13/10/2014 01:23:29 pm
Some good ideas developed into sentences this week Amelie. I like the way that you linked ideas across more than one sentence. Remember your school writing target is to use a range of sentence openers, can you explore this further in your next challenge?
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