As I walked into the trenches I could smell the smoke off the shelling. Also I could here gun shot off guns. I feel very nervous here in the war it is very noisy. I am scared when I hear the loud noises that sound like fireworks. I see craters in the ground and other people running everywhere.
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Mr Lockey
20/11/2014 09:34:37 am
You described the sights and sounds and even the feelings shared by many soldiers during WW1, a well written piece of work. Do you know the difference between the homophones 'hear' and 'here'? Which one fits your sentence best? I am sure you know after we learned about this in class.
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