As I walked into the trenches I immediateloy aware of the smell of stincking mud. I didn't feel very happy because it was dark and I was in a strange country. I was missing my family a lot and didn't know how long I would be away. It was very noisy with all the explosions and bullets. Luckily I was with my friends that went with me to the war.
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Mr Lockey
20/11/2014 09:42:31 am
Jack you obviously learned a lot about life in the trenches over the past two weeks. You recalled that friends often signed up together. Some nice description of the feelings and the surroundings. Could you check how to spell the word 'stincking' and let me know in school or post it on here? Thanks
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