When I hear the word BOOM, I think of fireworks. I go to see fireworks at my uncle Craig's house. On bonfire night the fireworks are pretty and loud. The biggest fireworks go BOOM. My dog Jocka does not like fireworks.
BOOM
When I hear the word BOOM, I think of fireworks. I go to see fireworks at my uncle Craig's house. On bonfire night the fireworks are pretty and loud. The biggest fireworks go BOOM. My dog Jocka does not like fireworks.
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Mr Lockey
30/9/2014 04:44:01 am
Thanks Katie, your sentences are starting to include those extra pieces of detail that make them interesting. Well written.
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