2. the bears are having bananas and biscuits .
3.they are having tea from a teapot .
4.the blanket is orange.
5.there is lots of pretty flowers behind them.
1. There are 5 bears having a picnic .
2. the bears are having bananas and biscuits . 3.they are having tea from a teapot . 4.the blanket is orange. 5.there is lots of pretty flowers behind them.
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Mr Lockey
29/6/2014 04:40:29 am
Thanks for your work Katie. I like your attempt to add some extra details. The next step for you is to explore different ways of starting your sentences, rather than using 'the', 'there' and 'they' all the time.
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Mrs Thwaites
30/6/2014 01:15:00 pm
Well done Katie. You have described the scene very well. I especially like 'the pretty flowers'.
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phoebie stephenson
17/7/2014 04:40:50 am
this work is very nice well done.
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