Boom goes the bom and the world shaeces. Boom goes the fireworrcks in the amzing night sky. Boom goaes the gun and scears everyboedy. Boom goes the music as it blasts. Boom goes the exploshen as the world cracles.
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Ms. Russell
2/10/2014 07:51:19 am
Hi Ethan, I enjoyed reading your entry this week. I really like the way that you chose to show different places and times that you would hear the word "Boom". I think you also used good descriptive words to give more detail in your sentences. Great work this week!
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amelie
12/10/2014 06:57:55 am
well done
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ayrin
14/10/2014 12:04:24 pm
Very good
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