I thought I had enough time before they came. But I was wrong. It all started a week ago when I had a happy job, happy life everything was fine. Until they came with an army of 1000. They told me that I had to do a job. (Everyone’s been giving something to do by them.) It was top secret. I had 24 hours to complete the task. They sent me to a cave and I heard footsteps could I complete the task before footprints caught up with me? Suddenly I saw a light, I had almost completed the task when…
Jak
4/4/2014 03:15:53 am
Really spooky Cian! We'll done
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Mrs Avis ( team 100 WC)
8/4/2014 03:21:25 am
I really enjoyed reading this! I read it at least three times and marveled at its construction! Great opening- powerful and evocative. You create tension and drama in a very limited number of words and really leave the reader wanting to know what happens next...... many many congratulations!
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keely
26/4/2014 03:13:19 am
quite spooky cian
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