I think I should be a night zoo keeper because I am good at fighting aliens and other monsters. In the world tick I saved all the animals, everyone said I was a hero but I had to come back here. I was sad until I found out I could get this job. In my other planet I met some troops called Cog, Bath and Pip, the chief alien. They were very nice friends. I'm good at staying awake and will never let anything happen to the zoo animals because I love animals too much. Also I have a zoo of my own.
Miss Willing
1/4/2014 04:13:12 pm
Hi Keely. You have given some good reason as to why you should be the Night Zookeeper. I always make sure that I read through my writing before publishing as I can then pick up mistakes - like missing capital letters off of proper nouns (the world Tick). I think that owning a zoo would have been near the beginning of your letter - that is really quite an important thing for your prospective employer to know! You’ve included some good ideas - well done.
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