One lovely sunny day two brothers called Ant and Dec were going to the beach, they set off with an enormous picnic bag full of yummy treats. When they had reached the beach they jumped into the sea and unexpectedly saw a green bottle with a treasure map inside. On the map was a marking saying x marks the spot. They climbed out of the sea and followed the map which took them right to the dark creepy rocks. They quickly found the spot and started digging. To their surprise they stumbled across a chest full of treasure which made them very, very rich.
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Lucy
22/4/2015 01:29:55 am
she done really well it sounds awesome she has tried to use connectives and detail to her work im proud for her well done.
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