As Timmy arrived at the Avignon Bridge he noticed something strange, the bridge only reached half way over the deep green lake. Suddenly he noticed a statue on the bridge, he swiftly ran over to it and “AAGGHH” he never realised. It was a silly man smothered in shiny silver paint!
It was Timmy’s fourth day in France. He woke up to the blazing sun shimmering in his dark blue eyes. As he got out of his bed he screamed at the top of his voice, “Today we are going to the bridge in Avignon. It looks so cool! ”
As Timmy arrived at the Avignon Bridge he noticed something strange, the bridge only reached half way over the deep green lake. Suddenly he noticed a statue on the bridge, he swiftly ran over to it and “AAGGHH” he never realised. It was a silly man smothered in shiny silver paint!
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keely
17/9/2014 12:45:35 pm
Good words, puntuation and speach.
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