Aidan Shaw
9/3/2015 02:36:03 am
Great! Just great! I like how you add suspense at the end with a to be continued with an eventful scene before it! Next time, what does a small country of England mean? England is a country, so there can't be countrys inside countrys. Besides, thanks for the great 100wc #25!
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AuthorMiss Shield is working with Mrs Coy and Mrs Hall and Year 6. We can't wait to begin sharing more of our work with the world! Maths Boot Camp has links to lots of great revision and practice websites.
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