James tiredly woke up after his lie in. He suddenly remembered he was going rock climbing, him and his sisters loved to climb. He dawdled down the stairs and ate his bacon sandwich for breakfast. As James and his sisters were on their way they saw a Hyena sleeping. Finally they arrived at the colossal grey dome which was the climbing centre; James couldn’t wait to climb. Next they ate their dinner at the climbing cafe, and then headed off to home. James and his sisters went climbing and were tucked up in bed after a exhausting but fun day.
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Helen Briscoe (Team 100WC)
8/2/2015 09:06:56 am
This is a really good 100WC James. You have used some fantastic descriptive vocabulary (dawdled, colossal) in your story. Great writing - well done :)
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