“He's good” said James. Then they went home (tea time).
One miserable day Mathew had to go to school. When the class was working, strangely a Hyena was next to Matthew. He ran out the classroom and had to climb the mountain ahead of him. Then grey clouds formed around him. After this Matthew went home and had a bacon sandwich with his sister, mam and dad, he loved it. Next he called on James and James had a sleep over at Matthews house. Matthew said “look there’s Bruno mars I love Bruno Mars, he's is a great singer”
“He's good” said James. Then they went home (tea time).
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Gerry Button 100wc team
11/2/2015 11:57:57 am
Hi Josh, thank you for your entry this week I enjoyed reading it. You made good use of the prompts and it was punctuated accurately. It sounded like an eventful day for Matthew. I was a little confused at the end as I thought James was sleeping over but after seeing Bruno Mars he went home for tea?
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