On Monday I went to the opticians because sadly I am blind, well was blind until the opticians gave me magic eye drops. the optician put them in and then I waited five minutes and then suddenly i was able to see again.
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MrsS
18/10/2014 01:35:29 pm
Hi Taylor, this is a really interesting piece, I like the way you ask the reader a direct question to draw them in to your story. It is a shame that this is only the 100 word challenge as I would have loved to hear more about what happened and what it was like being blind, I think you would have thought up some great descriptions. Keep up the good work.
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