Today has being the weirdest day of my life. It was my brothers 3rd birthday at Fantastic Funhouse, as we arrived there was colourful curly slides, colossal ball pits and many more fun kiddy activities. At one point I went down a twisty slide and landed in a ball pit but as I was getting out of the ball pit I felt something strange on my back. I suddenly stopped and thought to myself " What was that I could feel? Was it the wind, a kid throwing a ball?" As I turned to look it was a ...
Dear diary,
Today has being the weirdest day of my life. It was my brothers 3rd birthday at Fantastic Funhouse, as we arrived there was colourful curly slides, colossal ball pits and many more fun kiddy activities. At one point I went down a twisty slide and landed in a ball pit but as I was getting out of the ball pit I felt something strange on my back. I suddenly stopped and thought to myself " What was that I could feel? Was it the wind, a kid throwing a ball?" As I turned to look it was a ...
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It was winter and snow covered the land. I was having a snow-ball fight, when I reached down to get more snow, what was that I could feel? As I pulled it out, it was a key! " I think I know where it came!"
"It's from the old banded school up the high street," I announced. So me and my friends decided to investigate. When we opened the the door it was covered in cobwebs and old pieces of wood. We adventured on until we saw something glowing , it was gold! It turns out it was hidden there by thieves, and the police gave us half for finding the it. In the deep dark wood there is a cottage which is where I live. It's very very lonely and can be quite scary and spooky, especially at night. I hear all sorts of strange noises some I recognise and some I don't. I was in bed one night and just as I was nodding off I felt something brush against my face. What was that I could feel? I lay as still as I could, I was so frightened. Then I heard a noise, a deep rumbling and then a thud. Then crunching and a huge MIOUW and my cat Steve jumped up on my bed.
I was walking through the frosty woods, but what was that I could feel? It was like pinch on my leg but what was it ? I turned around but all I could see was a snake slithering across the frozen waste land, I ran home as fast as I could ( mostly it was limping )
When I got home my mam was up stairs" mam !!! I rhave been bitten by an adder " she ran down " what did you say?" "I said I have been bitten by an adder." Suddenly i dropped on to the ground ... Today was the weirdest day of my life. Last night, and wonder what was that I could feel ? How did it get there? It was a rat! Smearing mud up my leg as it slithered up my sensitive skin. I screamed. Calling mum to come to my rescue. I expected mum but instead a lady with a hideous look: a big, thick red glove on her arm, a clean monoglass on her left eye and a hideous brown duffer coat. On her glove was a unknown breed of dog as she stepped in.
To be continued... Now, this week’s prompt is all about the sense of touch. It is:
…what was that I could feel?… Make sure you think carefully about the tense – when did it happen? Check that the story makes sense and that your ideas link together. Please try to visit other posts and leave a supportive comment. I woke up this morning it was a beautiful glorious day my mam called me down for breakfast it was delicious cornflakes. But as I walked downstairs the light was so bright i thought I needed my sunglasses. Anyways after breakfast I had to make my bed all the sheets and duvet was off it was hard. After all of that I got changed to go see my friend Ally. She’s 11, well… it’s her birthday I’m not sure what to get her maybe a nice top or shoes. My dad told me he had good fashion sense so I’ll ask him.
Once in history, there was a beautiful princess named Mirada. She was the single most gorgeous women to mankind. One day, the light was so bright it blinded the princess causes her to lose her vision. The prince became blind! The prince was so devastated that he called the castle doctor immediately. Later that day, the princess was placed in her death bed for all eternity. The Prince was in hysterics as her grave was placed in the castle garden. There was no one left in this world as pretty as her. The prince’s life was changed for all eternity
One sunny afternoon Jake was heading to the beach with his brother to see the bright light what the have been seeing lately. When the 2 brothers got there they went to stay with there uncle who worked there in the light house. When the day got dark the 2 brothers went down to the beach to investigate the mysterious light .when Jake stood up saw the light the light is so bright is so bright yelled Jake to his brother. Hold on said Jake its coming from the light house. So after a while Jake and his brother went home.
“Walking through the enchanted wood… but there was nothing to fear because I met my friend Leo owoho!” Sang Taylor. Suddenly Taylor ran frantically to his house. Leo did not understand why? A couple of days later Leo saw Taylor printed in the local newspaper with quotes saying “The light was SO bright,” and “I left my friend and ran!” So when Leo found out what was going on he stayed out for the next 4 nights at 10oclock. On the fourth night he gave up and just when he was packing up he screamed it’s a…
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